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Leave YOUR game here, and I'LL review it! (The Crigence Critique 2.0)

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  • edited March 11
    Hey @Crigence , so I have finished the game A Boy in Armor, though most of your negatives were not fixed, though some not really being negatives but more of comments (Hey, you were just trying to find downsides to it, reviewers got to do what they got to do :lol: ). But I have added quite a bit more, fixed some bugs that were noticed from other reviews. But here is the point: I want you to see how it is going, since it is now done, and, sadly, I have ran out of objects and levels. Now, don't you say that I'm "wasting objects", because I have no idea how you do that :lol: I tried finding ways.

    Well, here is the link: flowlab.io/game/play/1095375

    Thanks, and sorry if that seemed a bit rude up there, I was just saying that the "chatbot book" was more of a comment than negative. However, please re-review this! I have put a lot of work into this, and would like a bit more feedback. Thanks for all of the hard work you have put into these reviews, and good luck!
  • last to first pffffffffffff
  • @Crigence I'd say like another month or so before I'm done with Slaughter then you can review it.
  • Hey @Crigence I created another game, but it's a demo and I was wondering if you could review it for me and give out a few pointers or advice that I could do better on the game.
    The Cursed Room: http://www.flowlab.io/game/play/1114643
    It's supposed to be scary so try to keep the volume on low.
  • edited March 12
    @rcreger
    To be honest, not much has changed since the first time i played. But still the 5 things that were added did make the game better! Here's my notes:
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    +The rcreger startup screen is really cool! You should use it in more games! (But why is the poor E getting stabbed? Quick someone take it to the rcreg- ER!)
    +Why are the clouds STILL shaped like earphones? (Damn! Everyone has Airpods but me!)
    +The story is still as good as before!
    +...that's still one depressing ending...
    +I can no longer escape death at the end of the game but i can still walk left and (Try) to escape!
    +I just remembered at the last second you added a sprint "button"!

    -The wisps don't really need to be there, i think most people know to walk right in a platformer!
    -It would be nice if you could click the citizens like Smilk the Old to learn more about what they do! You have a observation system set-up, USE it!
    -The problem where if you can CLICK A BOOK AS YOU'RE ALREADY READING IT is still here!
    -Walking sounds for the grass would be nice!
    -There still isn't much detail in the environment :/
    -I feel like pure silence to let you ponder what just happened would be much more fitting for the final screen!

    rcreger
    suicide forest
    u ded now
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    To be honest, there wasn't much point to me re-reviewing the game. From what i could tell it's exactly the same minus some bug fixes and inclusion of the kinda useless wisps! Still it has improved so i gotta give it that!
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    Scores (Scale of 1/5)

    Visuals - 3.5
    Sound - 3.5
    Controls - 3 (Thanks for the sprinting option!)
    Stability - 5

    Final Score: 3.5/5.
    Flowlab storytelling at its finest, now with 2% more quality!

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    Recommendations:
    Fix the downsides and give the story more depth... I really don't have much else to say! ~Crigence
  • That is a great idea @Crigence ! I didn't think about adding a click for the characters, especially since that will not use any objects! I will definitely add this! Thanks, and I know not much has been added, and I think I might remove the wisps to get another object, possibly to make a background object that you wanted :lol: There has been some minor fixes, such as making it so the jump FX only happen when you actually jump, fixed SEVERAL typos, and a wisp bug that could break the game. I'm not sure, still, about the book glitch is. I haven't seen it yet, and still trying to find it. Now for the music for the last screen: Do you not like it? Just wondering, as I was trying to find something to fit that wasn't all hyper and jumpy. But really, thanks for the review, and I will definitely several of those things. Thank you for the review, and good luck for any others, and have a great day!
  • Can click on all characters except for Wolfhang for now.
  • edited March 13
    @SomeGuy542
    Hey, this is Shane, I'm Crigence's brother. Crigence went missing for some reason after playing your game and this... Review thing told me to upload this here so here it is. Here's his notes:
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    6:12 PM +HOLY LATIF! Remember when i said that the main-menu for The Ruins was eerie? Well, this guy took that and used it against me! Clever!
    6:12 PM +So the game starts, and it tells us loud and clear that we need to figure out what's going on in the attic!
    6:14 PM +That slow eerie fade in after he said's he needs batteries... This game is too good at its job...
    6:21 PM +I just realized this game has REALLY good atmosphere! Those creepy "attic" noises really seal the deal!
    6:25 PM +You COULD build up tension a bit more before entering the attic by, i don't know, making blood appear on the ladder once you get the key or by putting a jump scare in front of it or even making the player comment on how scared they are to enter the attic!

    6:16 PM -So the game started and I'm currently taking notes in the closet: Why is this kids house haunted? Is there a reason?
    6:17 PM -That dark guy running at you was a cheap jump scare! (PS: I retreated back into my safe-closet!)
    6:19 PM -Does the kid REALLY need to shout at every painting and dresser he sees? I'm hiding behind a fridge and even I think that's stupid!
    6:20 PM -There's too many empty rooms and they're kinda unsettling me...
    6:22 PM -YOU MEAN TO TELL ME I CAME ALL THE WAY TO THIS TRAPDOOR ONLY TO BE TOLD I NEED A KEY!?!?
    6:26 PM -So i get into the attic and i can't see my hand in front of my face... Wait is that my hand or someone else's?

    Easter egg face, find me
    safety closet
    strange figure
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    This is a great horror game, especially by Flowlab standards! I would love to see this finished as for some reason after i went into the attic everything went black. Anyway i gotta cut this short i'm hearing some strange sounds coming from my basement and i wanna go check it out! Thanks for reading and have a good, safe night!
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    Scores (Scale of 1/5)

    Visuals - 3.5
    Sound - 4 (The sound just kills it!)
    Controls - 2.5 (A sprinting option would be nice?)
    Stability - 5

    Final Score: 3/5.
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    Recommendations:
    Just make the game longer and add more scares and it's golden! ~Crigence
  • edited March 13
    For the record i'm 100% fine and secondly that glitched text was 100% intentional!
  • edited March 12
    Well the game isn't done yet and when you get to the attic it kind of explains why theres a ghost in your house. I will add jump scares and I will update the shadow guy so he kind of chases you through the house and then fades away. I really appreciate the review @Crigence.

    The Reason the kid tells you about things like drawers and paintings is because is doesn't yet know what he's up against and the painting was kind of an Easter egg-like thing advertising my friends game who just started not to long ago and trying to get a hang of the game.
  • @Crigence did you do that on purpose? It looks like this:

    Screenshot_20190312-121909_Chrome
  • Didn't see that @meburningslime , but I think that was great work on @Crigence ! You never fail to show creativity in your reviews! And I think @SomeGuy542 's game was very well made, and would be a great start for people on making more of a horror genre on FlowLab, as there is not too many (That are good, by the way). Great work on the both of you!
  • Added some bushes to the game @Crigence , and you were right, it gave the background more of a pop, and was a bit less "boring" (Nod to Bored Reviews.. Everything related to something bored is a reference, okay? :lol: ). Thanks for the suggestion!
  • edited March 13
  • Are old requests ever going to be reviewed? Because it kinda seems like if there is a steady stream of new reviews, you won't get to the old ones.
  • It said translate to HORROR VIETNAMIESE
  • edited March 14
    @Caleb Strawberry 3
    Well, honestly i don't think there is really a system that's perfect.

    New to old - If i can keep up, new ones will be answered sooner but old ones will take longer!
    Old to new - If i go to slow or there's a game i don't want to review (Yes, those exist.) then the whole line gets slowed down! (You gotta remember, my reviews take more effort then my competitions easy-to-crap out reviews!)


    I chose the one that was easiest for me (New to old) and its worked better FOR ME so far! I mean, i know it's inconvenient for those wanting to get their games reviewed (Unless your one of the ones who upload games i can do/wanna do quickly) but frankly i was kinda getting sick of reviewing the other way as i got a big stream of, to be honest, unfun looking or broken games.

    The only thing i can recommend is re-submitting your game and hoping it doesn't get lost in the newer ones!
  • edited March 14
    @Simple_doge5 [Requested through website]
    I've finally got to your game! Here's my notes:
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    +The menu is VERY detailed looking!
    +The game tips are pretty helpful!
    +The graphics look very good!
    +I Googled the game and they look pretty close to the original!

    -The game runs at a strange and unnatural-looking resolution, as you can see in my screenshots!
    -The game is very confusing! I can't tell what's going on!
    -And it also has no tutorial to help with that confusion! This may seem suprising, but not EVERYONE has played Plants vs. Zombies!
    -The key placement doesn't make sense, why not just put it as 1-2-3-4-5 instead of just seemingly-random keys? I had to scroll down to check the instructions!
    -I can't read the almanac when the text blends in with the background! Make it white!
    -I'm not sure if this is supposed to match the original game or what, but to me it feels like the sun generates WAY too slowly and the stuff that generates them also takes too long to get due to that!
    -A reset button would be nice!

    menu vs resolution
    pants vs mommies
    death
    ________________________________________________________

    I think my main issue with this game has to be how confusing it is! I get that this is a port of a different game and all, but still it would be nice if you could at least TRY to explain what the heck is going on here to the players!
    ________________________________________________________


    Scores (Scale of 1/5)

    Visuals - 4.5
    Sound - 3
    Controls - 3.5 (The controls definitely feel involved!)
    Stability - 5

    Final Score: 3.5/5.
    It would probably be a 2.5 if the game didn't look so good!

    ________________________________________________________
    Recommendations:
    Add a tutorial or something to explain to the player what the heck is going on! ~Crigence
  • Weird, in my screen the resolution was much better for some reason :\
  • edited March 14
    @ToastMaster64
    Well, i finally reviewed the game! Now you can stop harping on us about it! Here's my notes:
    ________________________________________________________

    Pros:
    *I love that high quality intro!
    *The main-menu is pretty good too! It's simple and sets a good tone for the game!
    *AND the main menu has sound effects! Good job!
    *The shop is pretty nice too! Not many games have these!
    *The gameplay is surprisingly addictive!
    *Working pause button
    *There's a in-game level editor... Let that sink in for a moment.

    Cons:
    *The background of the shop is a bit too grimey for my tastes...
    *The background music is a bit irritating after a while, I'd rather have silence!
    *What's with this one stupid rock in Level 2 and why can't i get past it?
    *It would be nice if you could control how fast you're going!
    *The secret page isn't so secret if you can just use the editor and walk right into it :|
    *Instant respawn would be nice! I can help you set it up if you want!

    awks
    running
    timple
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    On its own merit: Temple Runner Retro is a pretty dang good runner! It's not AS good as everyone else will constantly tell you (2 other reviewers rated it the highest score!) but it is still definitely a good game! I recommend it for when you got some time to kill!
    ________________________________________________________


    Scores (Scale of 1/5)

    Visuals - 4
    Sound - 3
    Controls - 3
    Stability - 5

    Verdict: 4/5.
    Overrated.

    ________________________________________________________
    What I would like to see:
    Add a help screen and instant respawns and the game will be much more enjoyable! ~Crigence
  • edited March 14
    I rated it 9 not 10
    But its a great game, its 9
    And toastmaster wanted that to be SECRET! :lol:
    I NEVER SAW THE LEVEL MAKER WOOOOOOOOOOOW :astonished:
  • Screenshot_20190314-140451_Chrome


    Screenshot_20190312-121909_Chrome

    WHAT ARE YOU DOING CRIGENCE!?!?
  • Here is my game https://flowlab.io/game/play/979096
    Please criticize it completely
  • https://flowlab.io/game/view/1112660 Keep in mind, this game is in early, early access, but im working on it.
  • oi Crigence

    I posted my game weeks ago.

    Do me a favor and tell me what you think

    (hey guys go to bored reviews, that guy's fast. He reviewed my game TWICE before Crigence even tried mine.) *cough, I mean what.

    could you actually try my game though, please?

    https://flowlab.io/game/play/1107801

    oh yah, and any passing people (stalkers) that see this to. please play
  • @my_name (<_>)
    Your
    on
    thin
    ice,
    pal
  • @my_name (<_>)
    he probably haven't seen yours.... (since i didn't, lol)
    also you may try suggesting your game on grigence's website.
    since my game was reviewed (plants vs zombies) there.
  • edited March 18
    @my_name (<_>) https://flowlab.io/game/play/1107801
    Alright, i'll review your game! Just don't advertise another reviewer again and we're all good! (This is just a joke, don't take this seriously). Here's my notes:
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    +The games looks alright and runs decently.
    +Opening special doors using the arrow keys is a good idea! Mind if i steal it for Bounce Jam?
    +The current movement configuration is fine, but why not a special sticky keys config where you're always in the middle but you have to press and hold up or down to move... Up or down?
    +How about the ability to slow down using A and to speed up using D?

    -How about giving it an ACTUAL name? Like "Ruin Run"?
    -The tutorial is kinda... Lazy.
    -The gamemode-selection menu is kinda confusing and it doesn't help there's lots of random crap lying around! Still, it has pretty relaxing music!
    -Spread the obstacles farther apart and render them earlier!
    -There's a VERY annoying delay in how fast you can move up or down! Shouldn't it be instant no matter what?
    --Turns out that annoying delay only occurs in classic mode! I don't care if it's like how this game originally was, that's just stupid!

    strange menu
    good tutorial
    coin collec
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    For a infinite runner: This game is actually pretty good! It has a lot of replayability and it's pretty addicting to play! Still, it's far from the best!... Wow this the first time i only needed 2 lines to fully explain my opinion on a game.
    ________________________________________________________


    Scores (Scale of 1/5)

    Visuals - 3.5
    Sound - 3 (The pinging gets kinda annoying after a while!)
    Controls - 2.5
    Stability - 4.5

    Verdict: 3.5/5.
    Just another endless runner.

    ________________________________________________________
    Recommendations:
    Just fix the negatives i noted and it's golden! ~Crigence
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